The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.
Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.
The graph illustrates the number of men and women employees
employed at six different sectors of the Republic of Freedonia
during 1975 and 1995.
Overall, employment is more in wholesale & retail trade
and public sector among both genders while least female
employment is recorded in the public sector(defense) in both years.
Firstly, females in wholesale and retail trade in 1975 are less than
600 and it proliferated to 800 by 1995 while male people's
The employment remained stable at 700. In the finance sector a
women are less than 2 out of 10 but after two decades they
are in equal proportion.
In the communication sector, female employment rose by nearly
100% while males are constant with 300. In defense, the female population
is around 3% which incremented to 10%, in contrast, more than
200 males are in 1975 but declined by a minute percentage. In
manufacturing and non-defense male and females are constant
with 300 and 700 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: while the least
...e and public sector among both genders while least female employment is recorded in the ...
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...or among both genders while least female employment is recorded in the public sec...
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...erated to 800 by 1995 while male peoples The employment remained stable at 700. I...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...ed stable at 700. In the finance sector a women are less than 2 out of 10 but after two...
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...d stable at 700. In the finance sector a women are less than 2 out of 10 but afte...
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...table at 700. In the finance sector a women are less than 2 out of 10 but after two...
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...100% while males are constant with 300. In defense, the female population is arou...
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...cremented to 10%, in contrast, more than 200 males are in 1975 but declined by a ...
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...75 but declined by a minute percentage. In manufacturing and non-defense male an...
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... but declined by a minute percentage. In manufacturing and non-defense male and f...
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...on-defense male and females are constant with 300 and 700 respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19496855346 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87565209996 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2703811089 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 3.83414634146 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25370424458 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119985128749 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072267276084 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781946488467 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572321099033 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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