Migration from and to the UK
The provided pie charts show the information about a number of primary reasons why people immigrate to and emigrate from the UK in 2007.
It is clear that definitting job was the biggest reason which encouraged people to do immigration to and from this nation. Additionally, the percentage of emigrating for pursuing formal study was by far lowest in 2007.
There were approximately 30% of people who decided to come to the UK in order to definite their job in 2007 - the highest figure shown in the pie charts. Similarly, the figure for emigration in this purpose also reached the highest proportion of about 29% compared to other reasons. However, while people who immigrated to the UK for searching for work accounted for 12%, this figure for emigration doubled with around 22%. By contrast, the rate of citizens whose main purpose for immigration and emigration was accompany were same, at 15% and 13% respectively.
Thanks to the world-class education, the rate of people who reached the UK for formal study stood at an impressive level, about 26%, compared to only 4% for emigration. In addition, just 6% of survey participants did not mentioned the reason why they conducted migration to the UK, whereas people left this country with no stated reason made up 18%. Roughly 11% and 14% were the proportions of people who migrated to and from the UK in 2007 for other reasons respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... primary reasons why people immigrate to and emigrate from the UK in 2007. It is...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accompanied'.
Suggestion: accompanied
...pose for immigration and emigration was accompany were same, at 15% and 13% respectively....
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
... just 6% of survey participants did not mentioned the reason why they conducted migration...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, similarly, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92372881356 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79612838698 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555084745763 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1421693019 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.2 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209818524903 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946209820355 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989132801223 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143364580374 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089316874495 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.