It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.
Nowadays, we are in the technology era which is dominated by the media. Day by day we rely our lives on new inventions like gadget, phone, television, laptop, internet. Some people think as they can’t live their life without technical machinery. Living in this era with a massive-media can alleviate us and solve our problem, even though they realize about the negative impact for their addiction.
The inventive media have been increasing massively since the millennial era, that brings our live to new form. Some experts have warned our society about the drawbacks of our dependence, but they ignore it and only minority recognize. For example, the majority people have started losing their ability to communicate with others, as a proof, they rarely keep in touch with their friend in the real world, but they often discuss to a person whom is known via cyber. Furthermore, the accessible information can lead to distract the main material, because there is an unscrupulous group manipulates some news for their propaganda.
On the other hand, it is apparent that in the modern age as we face certainly, the technology has a huge positive impact, because an internet network reaches each corner in every part of our lives, so we can easily access everything in the internet such as information, researches, studies. For example, the appearance of internet alleviates students to access more journals, for a reference of their theses or dissertation. Moreover, a scholar can intensively interact to the lecturer and ask some advices in completing their report and will give a significant impact for a society.
From the postulate above, we can conclude that in the right hand, the invention of technology can make our live better, but when is used in the wrong way it is going to give a harmful effect. So, the final decision depends on us.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01948051948 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77388278486 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8277292699 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160570486176 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616884868986 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515164025623 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971457195502 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05298204979 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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