The table below gives information on the proportion of Carbohydrates Protein and Fat in three different diets.
The circular charts underneath it was illustrate about proportion of Carbohydrates, Protein and Fat in three different diets. The modes measured in percentages.
Based on the patterns, Carbohydrates proportion was the most frequently recorded. Protein are unpredictable. However Fat was the bottom scores.
Referring to both diet styles, for average diet was led by Carbohydrates and Protein which has the same value, they are was two fifths, and the minimum number was Fat that has a fifth. However Healthy Diet styles, the top first was Carbohydrates which had a half, followed by Protein has less than a third and the last position was Fat which is numbered equal with Average Diet styles.
In the comparison with each of both styles, Diets for sports had an increaspancy for Carbohydrates which had three fifths. Protein and Fat in this category had decreased which the number of a quarter in Protein and less than a fifth in Fat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'illustrated'.
Suggestion: illustrated
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09032258065 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90935553616 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.5018110126 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288585002893 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131269733996 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685405343106 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194954567166 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245210324594 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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