The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tabular charts indicate the information about the sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in European countries : the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in the year 1999 and 2004.

Overall, the most striking fact emerged from the tables is that, the highest sale of coffee in Denmark (in 1999) and the UK (in 2004), while, the lowest in Sweden. Switzerland sold the maximum number of bananas in both years.

According to the tabular charts, in 1999, in UK, 1.5 millions of euros of coffee was sold, but, in 2004, it was more than ten fold (20 millions) and the selling of Bananas were only 1 million; 5.5 million in 1999 and 2004 Switzerland sold 3 millions of euros of coffee, which was doubled in the year 2004. In Belgium, 1 million euros coffee was sold, same figure of selling in Sweden in 2004, it was doubled in Denmark in 1999, 1.8 million in Denmark and 0.8 in Sweden.

In addition, in 1999, 50 millions of users of bananas 12 years old in Switzerland, it were inclined by three times more in 2004 (about 47 millions). 0.6 million and 4 million's bananas were sold in Belgium, but, in Denmark, it was half only 2 millions of euros in 1999, it were declined by 1.1 million (0.9million) in 2004. In Sweden, 1.8 million and 1 million euros of bananas were sold in 1999 and 2004.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...harts indicate the information about the sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and b...
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Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ffee and bananas in European countries : the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium an...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...o the tabular charts, in 1999, in UK, 1.5 millions of euros of coffee was sold, but, in 2004,...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
...llion in 1999 and 2004 Switzerland sold 3 millions of euros of coffee, which was doubled in t...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '50 million'.
Suggestion: 50 million
...0.8 in Sweden. In addition, in 1999, 50 millions of users of bananas 12 years old in Switze...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
...gium, but, in Denmark, it was half only 2 millions of euros in 1999, it were declined by 1.1 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54468085106 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39778098124 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429787234043 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4419721782 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258000271938 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156435692225 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125180077138 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22750604397 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143226014077 0.0819641961636 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.88 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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