The friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He / She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1. why you think your friend would enjoy a camping.
2. Describe some possible disadvantages.
3. Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend.
I am writing this letter for giving some guidance on a camping holiday this summer as this will be your first time experience.
Let me explain in detail, the experience of camping is awesome because there is a lot of new to adventure and many places to explore also can get ample information. It will be full of enjoyment if we are going with friends.
Although there will be a lot of enjoyment we must be careful during camping because there might be accidents and need to be aware of those zones. the main drawback of camping is not having a proper guide. Because of the lack of information, there will be confusion and not able to cover the whole place.
Whatsoever, I would like to accompany you so that we will have more fun, explore the places, and make a lot of memories. As I am free this summer.
Wating to hear from you soon.
Your Sincerely,
Lydia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ts and need to be aware of those zones. the main drawback of camping is not having ...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the places, and make a lot of memories. As I am free this summer. Wating to hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50943396226 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47389759228 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0764415669 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20545423957 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877511872097 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109848193318 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10984597577 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131743916877 0.0580467560999 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.