Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, there has being a vast number of tourists who want to explore the harshest, inhabitable terrain such as the Sahara desert and Antarctica for adventure and pleasure. The below essay will discuss both benefits and disadvantage who are in such an expedition
The media promotes the journey to such hostile places and to survive, explore, and admire the beauty of the places. seeing this many numbers of tourists want to have personal experience. The benefits include learning and adapting to such terrain having individual exposure, to have lifetime memories.
But there are a few disadvantages firstly travelling to a hostile region will be painful, some people who are not aware of climate and food of that place will have a difficult time getting through and people with a medical condition will have a hard situation
To conclude, the tourist who wants to visit adventure prone difficult terrain has to plan prior and should be aware of the situation know the possible risk and then have an awful journey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04733727811 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6176460811 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597633136095 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.404531645 49.4020404114 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.6 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272925052615 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138011647891 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587819120276 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156805959012 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612607669618 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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