Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Exploring places that are challenging has become hotspots for some tourists such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects.
Firstly, Visiting places where the weather conditions are extreme is always a memorable movement. Tourist thrives to explore these exotic places as its picturesque scenery and captures those movements. For instance, places like the Antarctic have their own beauty that cannot be comprehended, the huge ice block and the waters are unique and can not be found in other parts of the world. Secondly, the habitat of the animals and birds in this area bring life to the tourist. Animal living in these conditions seems to be impossible and leave people amazed. For example, animals like Camel are featured to live in extremely hot deserted places like the Sahara desert, this is highly impossible by humans. Hence relying on these animals for transportation. In short, exotic places on earth are unforgettable and also surprised by the life that exists.
Places with extreme weather conditions are dangerous too. Though the tourist opts for these places they must be medically examined and be monitoring, like the heart rate and oxygen level. For instance, places where the temperature is below minus degree, our body might not cooperate easily, usually disrupting the flow of blood also causes breathing problem. Another reason, because of these exotic places are adventurous, some tourists risk their life. Putting life in this situation is dangerous. For example, climbing the massive ice is a risk, one must be experienced. Hence travelling to such places are too dangerous.
To conclude, although visiting the Sahara desert and the Antarctic where conditions are difficult, it is worth and also dangerous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28070175439 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6482605777 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4171153087 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6111111111 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339333773574 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106862324047 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831374917736 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232888368011 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207579900571 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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