letter to the shop manager for purchasing electrical goods
Dear Mr. Mathew,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in reference to buy some electrical goods for my under construction house.
As you are aware that there is some renovation going on for the last six months, I need to buy a few electrical items like four tube lights, three ceiling fans, two switchboards, three sockets and fifty meters of copper wire. All these items should be branded with at least a years warranty. If the additional warranty is possible on tube lights and ceiling fans I can pay an additional cost. Could you provide the cost of goods and also let me know the mode of payment if it will be via credit card or cash?.
Once you have packed the goods, I will ask my labour to collect the goods from your shop as they live nearby.
I look forward to receiving items from your side.
Yours faithfully
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Mathew, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 4, column 511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if it will be via credit card or cash?. Once you have packed the goods, I will a...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ems from your side. Yours faithfully vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53548387097 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31264901649 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729032258065 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.910642994 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1111111111 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167331776748 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542126414965 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817349649167 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998973747378 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816342671422 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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