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The maps illustrate the layout developments of place at the seaside resort of Templeton during a 15-year period from 1990 to 2005
Overall, the area witnessed dramatic changes with expansion and relocation of a large number of facilities while public facilities remained location such as hospital, school and railway station
It is clear from the map that the biggest change that happen at place was demolished of many trees. there was a new airport to the north of the right side of river and the ferry near the bottom right corner. In addition, all trees and house was demolished to make way for factory in the south of the right side. Railway was expanded from railway station running directly west.
On the left side of river, many apartment building were constructed and replaced all houses in the south of the city.. Only a few trees and houses still remained In the northwest area of the city,, while more apartment building were constructed around the big lake. Finally, there was a construction of a new road along the main road, on both side of it, couples of houses were built as well as a super market appeared.
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- TASK 2In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- MAP 78
- map 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...hanges with expansion and relocation of a large number of facilities while public facilities rema...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... at place was demolished of many trees. there was a new airport to the north of the r...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...aced all houses in the south of the city.. Only a few trees and houses still remai...
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Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...mained In the northwest area of the city,, while more apartment building were cons...
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Line 4, column 385, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ide of it, couples of houses were built as well as a super market appeared.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, still, well, while, in addition, sort of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76020408163 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46771637652 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.807049539 44.8134815571 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.285714286 76.5299724578 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 4.34317383033 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0909085539739 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026460252134 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648141161937 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662069842024 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744882667575 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.