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The table gives information about the underground railwway system in six cities.

The table compares the underground railway system in six cities in terms of the opening date, kilometres of route and annual numbers of passengers. Overall, London boasted the oldest railway station and the largest proportion of route, while Tokyo recorded the highest number of travellers per year.
As is observed from the data, London initiated its subway system the earliest in 1863, as well as built the longest rail route of 394 kilometres, outnumbering Paris by roughly 200 kilometres. By contrast, Pari ‘s number of annual subway travellers far exceeded London. It is also noticable that Tokyo, which established its rail system later and registered a lower number of kilometres than Paris and London, dominated the category of annual passengers. Tokyo’s stations welcomed a staggering 1927 million people per year, approximately twice as many as London.
Looking closer at the three remaining countries, Washington D.C ranked four in all the categories. It was the fourth city to launch its rail system, recording a moderate number of 126 kilometres of route and 144 million annual travellers. Kyoto and Los Angles were the latest to establish their underground systems. Despite opening 20 years earlier, Kyoto had 17 fewer kilometres of routes compared to Los Angeles. Forty-five million passengers used Kyoto’s underground railway station annually in proprotion to 50 million of Los Angeles.
In summary, London was the oldest railway service provider and the possesor of the longest rail route, while Tokyo recoreded the highest number of annual passengers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, while, in summary, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42682926829 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77382659035 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.4139754043 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106489614509 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455433550786 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761452340282 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709675011676 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639457497319 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 8.71597938144 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 41.2886597938 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, while, in summary, as well as

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