Write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things give details of your stay why those two things are important How he can return the things to you

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things.
-give details of your stay
-why those two things are important?
-How he can return the things to you?

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that during my recent visit to your hotel, I forgot to collect my belongings.
At the onset, I was traveling to Ho Chi Minh City last weekend and I checked in your Queens Town Hotel on Saturday i.e. 14th March 2021. My booking reference number was FHFHH57585N and I stayed in Room No. 456. I checked out yesterday at noon.
While in a hurry to board a flight, I forgot to collect my Visa card and some essential documents. As I frequently use my card for routine transactions, it will take more time to block the existing card and request a new one. Moreover, the file, which I left in the hotel is of great importance for my upcoming presentation.
I would appreciate it, if you could send these two items through express courier. I will pay the cost of shipment charges, My residential address is registered at your website portal for your reference.
I am hoping to receive my essentials at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
John Smith

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our website portal for your reference. I am hoping to receive my essentials at t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60112359551 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70504888748 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674157303371 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5892997952 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4545454545 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128422465676 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045909449296 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438365055826 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651716999462 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443192545953 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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