You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. Samuel,
I Harbani Bhamra, your new tenant, am so glad to finally rent an apartment with my family here in Toronto! As per our contract, we moved in yesterday and I am very happy with the place.
I am writing to you mainly to inform you about the damaged furniture in my apartment. The flat is no doubt, spick and span. Although, the furniture is not in an appropriate shape which is very disappointing. The couch in the living room is very old and sinks in when one sits on it. The dining table has four chairs out of which one is missing a leg and the other has a broken handle. The mirrir of the cupboard in the master bedroom has a huge crack across itself and lastly, the bed in the kids bedroom is too fragile.
I would request you to plase look into this matter at the earliest as we had agreed to pay for a well furnished flat. I would request you to either get the furniture exchanged at the earliest or we can discuss another price for the apartment. Do let me know what is best so that I can do some arrangements as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Harbani Kaur Bhamra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... The flat is no doubt, spick and span. Although, the furniture is not in an appropriate...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... leg and the other has a broken handle. The mirrir of the cupboard in the master be...
^^^
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
... for the apartment. Do let me know what is best so that I can do some arrangements as s...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, lastly, look, so, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25837320574 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41876321959 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6762458377 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9090909091 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196009864548 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060234401813 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562693502461 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110535860909 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400021152682 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.