You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Jones!
I hope you are doing great. It’s been a long time since we met and I was planning to write a letter to share the circumstances that forced me to move out of my previous accommodation. As you are aware that I was sharing the place with four international students and was facing issues in terms of privacy. I tried to manage to stay there as the place was closer to my office but lately, the issues became unavoidable and I had to decide to move out.
This decision turned out to be a blessing in disguise because I met three amazing housemates who are all working professionals and we got along instantly. The house itself is much better as compared to the last one in terms of space and facilities available. All of the rooms are ensuite which is a plus, moreover, the room that I got is upstairs and enables me to enjoy the quiet time as well. On top of that, the landlord is a friendly person and visit frequently to ensure we are feeling comfortable and aren’t facing any issues.
I miss your surprise visits and was hoping if you could come over this weekend to spend the evening with me. We will watch a football match together and I am planning to cook your favorite food. We will also get the chance to talk about the report you were working on last time we met.
Let me know your plans so that I can manage my time accordingly.
Warm wishes,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...erms of space and facilities available. All of the rooms are ensuite which is a plus, more...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, moreover, so, well, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35019455253 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49226573916 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0017200702 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1666666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154750874917 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049193272195 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373057413577 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825332228241 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322203185031 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.