Your friend has agreed to take care of your flat when you are away
Dear Revathy,
How are you? Hope you are doing fine. I am ok too. I am glad that you will be staying in my apartment for next week, while I am going on a conference to London. Leaving the flat unattended disturbed me a lot. i am relieved now that you will be here.
I want to make sure that you are comfortable and feel at home, whence you are staying in my apartment. Ergo, i want to provide you some information about the flat and this neighbourhood.
There is an OTG oven in the kitchen which you can can " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">use when you want to cook something. Please do not forget to switch on the exhaust fan when you are using the cook top.
On top of the table in hall you can find the TV guide. I have written the Wi-Fi internet password in a diary in the same table draw on the right side. you also have a lot of restaurants around this area and a mall around the corner of the street. if you are bored you can see around on weekends.
Thank you again for you help pal and please do not hesitate to call me if you need anything.
With Luv,
Joyce
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...the flat unattended disturbed me a lot. i am relieved now that you will be here. ...
^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the flat unattended disturbed me a lot. i am relieved now that you will be here. ...
^
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... you are staying in my apartment. Ergo, i want to provide you some information ab...
^
Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: can
...is an OTG oven in the kitchen which you can can ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... the same table draw on the right side. you also have a lot of restaurants around t...
^^^
Line 9, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot of restaurants around this area and a mall around the corner of the street. if...
^^
Line 9, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... mall around the corner of the street. if you are bored you can see around on wee...
^^
Line 9, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... mall around the corner of the street. if you are bored you can see around on wee...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40639269406 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73653543288 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598173515982 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8402609918 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.3125 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6875 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168741817168 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613357662562 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366070537716 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100934331238 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133790437608 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.