Who should be responsible for our people.
It is true that the old Peoples situation gets worse in the many countries. The first question
must be what they want’s and what they needs? Especially their necessity are more benefit
more respect more quiet life.
If they have been working for a long time in the any company or in the Public Sector and when
they get old that’s means during their retire’s time company or Government must be
responsible of their welfare, it is just my opinion. They should take care of them.
In addition to company or Government. If they have good money they can look after
themselves. We can do something to make easier their life for example an organization or a
voluntary association, unions.
The families or Relative’s responsibility depends on their wealthy situations.
If they could do they should do anything.
Government’s or their former place could supply them with life insurance and a good Social
Security Policy. The Social community center or old age pensioner like in the Britain are very
useful for them.
For all of them life is hard and gets harder, in the their old ages. They expect more attention
and good life.
The old people, if don’t want lost them. We should do anything that what we able to do.
I.Bozyil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is true that the old Peoples situatio...
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Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
... be what they want's and what they needs? Especially their necessity are more be...
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Line 12, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ty depends on their wealthy situations. If they could do they should do anything. ...
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Line 19, column 50, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...f them life is hard and gets harder, in the their old ages. They expect more attention a...
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Line 24, column 3, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Bozyil
... anything that what we able to do. I.Bozyil
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, for example, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04694835681 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80836735435 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0775852605 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1875 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3125 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131330288091 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432592182895 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358702507971 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418619781166 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395683610027 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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