Your office building doesn't have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
Explain the problem
Suggest a solution
Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Sir,
I am writing to bring to your attention a major problem persisting among the employees of our company because of the lack of parking facilities on the premises.
Currently, a majority of workers park their private vehicles in front of the main gate or in the back street of the office. This causes traffic problems on the road for other travelers due to which every now and then employees are getting warnings by the Road Department officials. Not only it causes hassle for the vehicle owners, but also the reputation of our company is being jeopardized.
I would suggest, on behalf of all the employees who are facing this issue, to build parking for staff vehicles inside the building in the basement. Since it is not being used for any other purpose, it would be an optimum way to utilize that area of the premises.
The development of parking space would alleviate the problems that we have now. Moreover, the safety of cars and bikes would also be ensured in the private space particularly provided for the automobiles of staff.
I hope you would take this matter into consideration and will take the required action.
Yours faithfully,
Tara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your attention ...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...e road for other travelers due to which every now and then employees are getting warnings by the R...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60814110048 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5043371228 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182153628971 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753428920217 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709817023303 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936214437182 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573935953679 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.