accident
The most impressive alternative for lessening the car smash is police action. Although I personally, totally agree with the given statement, still there are several factors which should be analysed.
First of all I want to investigate about the roots of this crisis.There are numerous contributors to traffic accident for instance driving recklessly, over confidence of juvenile drivers, navigation errors, poor road condition and inadequate law and people's education.
Secondly, I would like to introduce some measures which should have been taken earlier, although It's late and If they were enforced sooner, this issue would be solved quickly, still there are a lot of people who can be saved through it.The actions such as:redesign and reshaping roads, equipping roads with facilities and in the critical cases, treating more harshly with delinquents and revoking their licenses can be practical.
To conclude, I'm definitely in favour with the given idea but the details should be considered precisely unless It will be associated with alot of bad consequences and casualty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49101796407 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85066419444 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.736526946108 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.051989188 49.4020404114 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.4 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0489235919447 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261970846131 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523941692263 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0327463557664 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567183519502 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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