Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Thanks to technological advancement, manifold aspects of mankind's life have hitherto been made easy and user-friendly. A large number of businessmen and students doing work through the Internet nowadays is the result of the development of technology. In my estimation, I believe that this evolution is a positive step and brings various benefits in terms of convenience and flexibility for time and location despite experiencing a few numbers of drawbacks.
First and foremost, the deciding advantage involved in working from home is to enhance people's convenience and flexibility which also means that they are given a chance to not merely schedule their own timetable but also decide a place to work. To exemplify, such commodious public areas including coffee shops and libraries would be comfort zones for students to accomplish their coursework faster and more effectively anytime rather than keeping themselves in a limited space and a fixed arrangement in the schoolroom. This would result in actively choosing an environment that best suits them to maximize their productivity in both work and study. Besides, there is another lucrative factor that working and studying online bring to people.
Furthermore, technology makes a decisive contribution to human intelligence which takes pride of place since there are more opportunities given on the internet for people around the world in order to broaden their horizons. One case in point is that Asian high-school graduates are able to enroll on an online course from any premier university in the West without having to relocate. It is due to many prestigious universities have been offering degrees and certificates on their website which means materials and books are accessible online. This growth of technology enables the possibility for students from different continents to acquire knowledge from their new educational methods. Nevertheless, technology may cause certain number of negativity.
Contrary to popular perception, a sedentary lifestyle is unintentionally led by the progression of technology. Instead of moving around in the office and classroom, both businessmen and students are able to work on their computers which will undeniably result in severe repercussions in relation to incredibly inactive life and health conditions. Consequently, the sitting lifestyle is a major concern of technological improvement.
On balance, although a sedentary life can be caused, the refinement in terms of time and geographical flexibility, as well as understanding extension, is indeed constituted with advances in technology. While recognising the possible disadvantages of technology, I consider it to be a positive growth in general.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6243902439 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25108319477 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590243902439 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3969567739 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.647058824 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1176470588 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194237325497 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509989775173 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363217765764 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857737015571 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531585303245 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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