The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, some people assume that the heavy traffic issues should be tacked by supplying a public transport system at no charge all year. In my opinion, i totally disagree with this idea for several reasons
Firstly, this solution could bring a financial burden for the governments as well as the citizens. Indeed, the governments budget might not sufficient to fulfill this plan so they have to impose heavier tax. For example, if this system is constructed, the government need to not only enhance the facilities such as buses, stations and roads but also hire more than employers to meet the requirement of all the citizen. Thus, it is impossible for the government to paid a huge amount of money.
Secondly, it is difficult to ensure the safety for users and workers. At night and early morning, for instance, there are only a few of people who use public transport, so bad people could take advantages of this to commit a crime and harm the drivers and passengers. Meanwhile, the security forces are unable to protect the citizens all time. Moreover, the small number of passenger at these time can cause the waste of energy as fossil and electricity, resulting in other problems about environment.
In generally, i believe that a free public transport system is not a effective way to deal with the congestion in the rush hour. The authority should collaborate with the publicity to give the best solution for this problem.
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in general, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92181069959 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69204380838 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6387924433 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.727272727 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0909090909 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178666867132 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671460002047 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520102372308 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116222939784 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622902969427 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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