The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic jams are truly a serious issue that government should handle with. Some people suggest that the ideal solution for this is to give complimentary public transportations all of time for citizens. However, I think this solution is not reasonable and effective in cities.
Firstly, it is precise that heavy traffic jams just only exist in predictable time, which is whether people arrive or depart their offices and workplaces. Therefore, traffic problems usually happen in peek time in business schedules from seven o’clock in the morning to five o’clock in the afternoon. As a result, local authorities just need to emphasis on that time. Moreover, entrepreneurs’ main purpose for heading to cities is to go to offices or conduct a meeting in convention buildings. It is typically scheduled in weekdays because of convenience and professional. Hence, governments possibly increase a number of traffic transportations, such as trains, ferries and light rails, to deal with the peak times in the urban areas.
Then, it is unnecessary to provide non- cost services in transportations. Most people prove that to serve free public transports will encourage civilizations to prefer to utilize them rather than their own cars. Governments, however, will carry a burden of costs and fees to operate the transitions. It is unfair for them to conduct this measurement, which will provide profits to the one side. Thus, to achieve the best result for both of citizens and governments, they can come op with some ideas of discounts of fees when people are travelling in the peak time as the essay discussed in the previous paragraph. The solution will have two main advantages, which are to attract civilizations to use public transport and to support governments make a profit.
In conclusion, traffic congestion is precisely a negative impact on economic development in big cities. While governments and local authorities receive suggestion to provide free transportations for citizens every day, it still has some disadvantages related to time and costs of operations in transitions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34743202417 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22209651783 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574018126888 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1570883667 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.117647059 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184653766725 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514488566368 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440135671186 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117951629653 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436021620735 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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