Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or Disagree?
Some people think that choosing a job with
high wage is more necessary than those
making one feel content/satisfied. I disagree
as job satisfaction could support career
growth and lead to fulfilled life.
Job satisfaction could help people reach their
potential, leading to career growth. This is
because, when workers enjoy and share pride
in what they do, they become motivated to
work harder and improve their skills,
increasing their productivity. As their
competencies in the field increase, they can
achieve their targets at work, having a better
chance at getting promotion, and eventually
be paid well for their hard work.
For example, Prita Ghozie resigned her
everyday job at marketing agency despite
high wage in order to pursue her passion in
finance education, and five years after
starting her career as junior advisor, she
became a Director of a well-established
finance company
In addition, job satisfaction could also help
people obtain a content and fulfilled life. A fat
paycheck usually comes with high
responsibility and pressure, and when
employees do not share the passion with job
itself, they are likely to experience burnout
and stress, affecting their quality of life. A
survey conducted by The Creative Economy
Agency in Indonesia reported that 67% of art
workers such as painters, dancers, and writers
had a happy life despite the low salary that
they get, because they have a chance to do
what they love.
To conclude, I believe that it is better for workers to choose a job that brings
satisfaction, rather than looking for a big
salary. It’s important for workers to focus on
their purpose in life and improving their
competencies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41025641026 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82033680056 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.409708166 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.7 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 37.0 4.38176352705 844% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167687642204 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742681408547 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459730013783 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0353155392374 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510689614901 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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