Children should allow every parents' advice.
Nowadays, there is a situation where adolescents are always accepting and following their parents' advice. Some people argue that it is a good approach for children in order to make a good decision, whereas others believe that it would be much more imperative if parents let children to sometimes decide how they sort out a dilemma by themselves. From my point of view, I completely disagree with the statement that the young generation should always follow their parents' advice.
First of all, it is clear that if youngsters follow their parents' guidance, they, therefore, would gain several advantages. For example, a child usually would not possess sufficient knowledge and experiences, while their parents have been through up and down many times in their lives, so it would be much better to listen to what parents say and follow their discipline that can help the child to be able to exit from many dangerous circumstances in the near future. In contrast, as children are not machines, they should be taught to give decisions sometimes in their mature spans without mom and dad's help. It is because being mechanical can result in lack of the abilities to live independently and also restrict self-reliance which is the most important skill in today's fast-paced world.
In conclusion, while the young generation should follow their parents' help in certain problems, but they would also have to practice to be decisive in order to adapt to the modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice being'.
Suggestion: practice being
...n problems, but they would also have to practice to be decisive in order to adapt to the moder...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05349794239 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69200606336 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.022256881 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.5 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175178676463 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895563822068 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500711256468 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134225124402 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634111053853 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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