Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is said that the breakthrough of computers is becoming the most significantly crucial in life in the last hundred years. While I accept that this innovation is essential, I would argue that the improvement of robots is more greatly wonderful.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why computers are an important invention. Firstly, they are useful tools to support learning. For instance, students were able to use Microsoft Word to write university assignments, or they could use Powerpoint to create slide shows for their presentations. Thus, learners could get better results thanks to these convenient devices. Secondly, they may store a huge source of information rather than books and newspapers. For instance, students can utilize the electronic library of their university to search for materials that are relevant to their majors. Moreover, undergraduates can easily enroll online university courses of educators in different parts of the world that they might not have before.
However, I believe that robots should be considered as the most essential innovation all around the globe. The first advantage is that artificial companions can promote emotional and physical well-being for the elderly. For instance, robot "Hirokan" in Japan, which is equipped with the latest advances in artificial intelligence. These robots can communicate with elderly individuals effectively to reduce loneliness, stress levels among senior Japanese citizens. In addition, as life is hectic so they can be used to do the housework in many families. Therefore, people can save a large amount of time and enjoy their life more like listening to music and parents can spend precious time taking care of their kids.
In conclusion, while computers are wonderful innovation for we as humans, I would argue that artificial technology devices are more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45172413793 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02695971839 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9716982704 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124904192665 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412643592433 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349849095065 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813084819246 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225451780885 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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