Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Throughout the 20th century, Humans had created numerous inventions, of which was the creation of computers, which is often considered the critical invention of the last century. I concur with the statement that computers are the most important innovation.
One of the prototypes of electronic computers was made to serve World War II, which would pave the way for later improvements and innovations in the computer industry. Despite that, it was mainly used for scientific reasons and space explorations because of its bulky design and inconvenience for mass consumerism. However, a few decades later, Human beings had successfully transformed conventional computers into personal computers, meaning everyone could afford to buy one and bring it anywhere they go. As a result, such improvement altered the course of human society in a good way. For example, computers were used in the production line to make it more organized and helped run unnecessary errands, thus saving an immense cost of sweated labours.
If there had not been any inventions of computers, People would have otherwise lived in the stone age. Thanks to the integration of advanced computers, students can now write and research their schoolwork much faster with high efficiency, which features built-in visualization tools and educational assistance features. Thus, Not only do computers help students enhance their academic performance but also their level of creativity. Computers play an indispensable part in processing daily tasks that help to level up employees' productivity by organizing the most urgent tasks, setting up schedules, and so forth.
To conclude, Given the benefits computers provide for human society mentioned above. I firmly believe that the creation of computers is one of the most critical inventions over the last century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 518, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48936170213 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98691039716 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656028368794 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3125895225 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.076923077 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156380777112 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605662811803 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050080067398 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103724120583 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298637027047 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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