Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this when they shop. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In the fast-paced digital world, the vast majority of advertisements are published for their business. Some people take a view that the amusement or annoyance from aids have no adverse impact on their shopping. As far as I am concerned, I partly concur with this statement.
Firstly, allocating more funds on the commercials encourages individuals have a range choice for their shopping. It seems to have many types of product for the lowest to the highest levels creating the diversity for buyers. To illustrate, with the various assortments for smartphones such as Apple, Samsung, Oppo,... The financially- advantaged have faculties to purchase the product on the expensive price having the long- term usage and endurance like the Apple with the exorbitant costs.
Secondly, the impetus of advertisements is the indirect leverage to propagate their product. Thanks to the media, the owners are capable of utilizing the using social platforms such as Facebook, Tiktok,... on a more regular basis in lieu of using the financial resources to print the visual posters into the general public.
Nevertheless, with the aid of cutting-edge technology, providing the substantial amount of advertising on the social media which is more effortless provokes the uncomfortability and obsess while going shopping. It is on the card that the huge selection for each goods is the roof reason promoting consumers have hesitance for their need. I will take the above illustrations. The smartphones of Apple, Samsung, Oppo,... trigger the confuse for the clients. It counts on the recognition of brand names in each area and the useful instruments for each sphere. If people want a energetic tool for their marketing career, it is advisable to buy the product of Apple with the huge GB to foster the effective productivity.
To sum up, the promotion for aids in the market have definite pros and instinct cons to the feelings of the customers. From my point of view, each company should take an advantage of the commercial activities on the supermarket or central malls moderately to prevent the jeopardies leading to the loss.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18713450292 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98575096069 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567251461988 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2014737566 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3684210526 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0485646333774 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0162783358184 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324653545735 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0344310955976 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487167937664 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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