Dicuss both sides of working both parents or only one of them
In modern era, this issue has become a matter of discussion due to all parents prefer to work so that enhance the income of the family itself. Thus, in this case parents divide into two parts, some of them support the idea that both parents should work while the others prefer the opposite of this matter. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.
Parents who prefer to work and leave their children for someone will take care of them think from another side of the results. They believe that they can compensate their children anything they lose during absenting. So they will buy a lot of toys and travel with them because the income of the family became high ignoring all the negative sides.
On the other hand those who prefer to stay one of them with the children. They say that absenting the parents can leave a lot of gabs in the children's heart. As well as, they perceive what adversely happen during nothingness of censorship such as practicing bad habits or doing anything danger, in the worst cases maybe firing or catastrophic wounds.
From what I have mentioned above and as far as I am concerned, stay the parents with children can make a lot of positive aspects and few of downsides that can make the parents regret all the life. The income is necessary , but from my overall perspective I see that put the children under the censorship and the taking care of them is more important in their childhood and in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64285714286 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36787071228 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6876592443 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.272727273 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194888621972 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070011033756 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707628024436 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108146005037 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482471537198 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.