English as a global language

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English as a global language

It is undeniable that English becomes more and more well-known on over the world. Though there are several negative impacts regarding this trend, I do believe that the positive aspects of the popularity of English are more noticeable. This essay will first demonstrate that the culture will be affected by Western culture becoming a worrying trend, followed by a discussion on how the universal language helps people in many aspects of life.
One obvious drawback can be seen when English is considered as a global language is other cultures will be impacted. Owing to having a strong influence, Western culture is increasing worldwide. Youngsters; nowadays, lacking interest in their traditional ceremonies or customs is a clear example of this tendency. On the other hand, this is a worrying trend related to language is the medium through which it is passed on to future generations.
However, those aforementioned disadvantages can be overshadowed by the pros of this universal language are helpful in some aspects. Today, many people travel around the world for many purposes such as for leisure, vacation, business, or medical treatment, and when you are in other countries with their own languages, you need to know the common language to serve your purposes. As a result, English comes to an aid to give a hand for you to make your two-way communications happen successfully. Thanks to the common language, you are able to adapt to a new environment relatively simply; even more, providing you with many chances to seek a better job, make friends easily, or discover anything about the cultures of other countries straightforwardly. Additionally, English also builds a communication bridge among people from different cultures and nationalities. For example, if you travel to Viet Nam, in the case that you do not how to speak Vietnamese, you can use English instead to help you communicate with others due to English is a popular language so many people know it.
Overall, these are positive aspects of a common language because having it can open more and more opportunities to change your life. Therefore, the earlier you learn it, the faster you can master it and have a better life in studying or even future business.
As it can be concluded that the disadvantages of the impact on other cultural traditions in some nations when English becomes a global language may seem quite minuscule when compared to the advantages. Individuals have to filter the cultural knowledge they have known because of the popularity of English to protect their own traditions while considering the global language as a chance for them to get a bright future.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09862385321 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95085988618 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509174311927 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0414125312 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.764705882 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6470588235 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28972277884 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997749371175 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897402911981 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176629732786 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094700073725 0.056905535591 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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