Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Today, global warming is becoming the hottest environmental topic issue on the Earth due to the fossil fuel usage. Furthermore, authorities have to stop the use of the fuel by utilizing renewable energy, and citizens should commit this regulation.
To begin with, it is argued that the Earth’s warming is the most popular problem and originated by the fossil-based fuel consumption, increasing the global rise temperature. That is to say, if the utilization of this non-renewable energy inclines year-to-year, it generates increasingly the greenhouse gas to heat this planet, being warmer and warmer. For instance, Indonesian consumed petrol to energize the transportation, and this nation might be recorded as the third greatest contributor of greenhouse gas in the world as a result of that energy use, altering climate, then resulting the hottest temperature in 2003 in South East Asia.
How to solve this? Government in every country should regulate the consumption of fossil fuel in order to reduce greenhouse gas, and its citizens must support it. This is because when both them cooperate to change the energy by eco-friendly one, this may be possible to decrease this such toxic gases. For example, the US had implemented sunlight to be a main resource since 2019 to substitute petrol as the former energy, erecting the solar panels in the whole regions, and the American appreciated it, then obeyed the rules to apply on a daily basis. Therefore, it had a tendency to decline carbon dioxides, decreasing the greenhouse gas released to the atmosphere.
In conclusion, it is believed that the hot climate alternation is caused by the fossil fuel, so that national regulators and people living there should have a strong cooperation to tackle this issue. Where possible, this commitment have to be sustainable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, third, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25684931507 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00878140254 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0857417709 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.916666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879649922892 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349568121171 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554568950301 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606955513029 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385671085216 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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