Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, using sports events as commercial advertisements is being utilised by large enterprises. Meanwhile, there are some perspectives that believe that this negatively affects sports. From my point of view, I partially agree with this statement for the following reasons.
On the one hand, large companies are overusing sports events as only their promotion, which may cause some bad effects. There are a number of adolescents who are easily affected and are part of the main audience at sports events. Overusing sports seasons for promotion can consolidate their places in the commercial market, but not every product is appropriate. To exemplify, Tiger is known as one of the biggest sponsors of sports events. Probably, their products are not appropriate for teenagers who are under 18. However, Tiger is totally able to manipulate consumers by using the well-known players who are influential to use their beers. Therefore, sports’ image can get deteriorated by overusing advertisements.
On the other hand, due to enhancing the company’s image, numerous enterprises sponsor a large amount of money for sports events. On the contract, companies will fund the sports events to afford high-quality devices, accommodations and professional referees. With those conditions, sports producers implement companies’ benefits such as brand promotion. I consider it a healthy partnership when both sides gain their profits.
Altogether, I partially agree that considering sports seasons as advertisements by large companies can have a negative impact on sports. However, I do believe that if sports producers and enterprises know how to not overuse them, they may gain a healthy partnership from both sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60153256705 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11998338548 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2363847087 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45115180872 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134435818978 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717699498303 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255650115701 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448180223976 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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