Live on the internet
Thanks to the breakthrough in the information technology, people can find it so easy to do shopping, work and socialize through the virtual interaction on the internet. In my opinion, this is an absolutely positive development in the modern world.
There are various good reasons to explain why this innovation is the completely beneficial thing in our life. Firstly, it is obvious that people do not need to move to other locations in order to reach the face-to-face contact anymore. Therefore, this offers a golden opportunity for them to save their monthly transporting expense, time of moving and especially their individual safety. For example, the primary mean of transport is motorcycle in Vietnam and the residents in this nation suffer an extremely high rate of traffic injuries. Working, communicating or living through the Internet allow the citizens to boost the proportion of their safety during their lifetime. Moreover, the considerably declining frequency of modes of transportation also makes the consumption of fossil fuels go down significantly which can discourage the climate change to get worse and contribute greatly to the balance on the ecology on the earth.
The Internet provides the ideal environment for people to work, shop or keep in touch with friends or family at anywhere and anytime which enhances the independence in their life. They do not need to suffer the pressure generated by some issues in the surrounding workplace such as: colleagues, physical conditions and fix timetable. Especially, some people who have the strong family commitment can find it easier to balance their housework, entertainment and work to reach the outstanding performance. In addition, students can keep the contact with their family even they study far from home which enhance the inspiration and support for them during their study.
In conclusion, the developement about the Internet life is always considered as a positive change due to its many undeniable advantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36942675159 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02055919341 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608280254777 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.375456837 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.692307692 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125060079274 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434273445656 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755130809353 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800535302249 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026785212931 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.