More and more people want to own items, such as cars, clothing and other things, that are made by famous brands. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
At the present time, many people desire to buy some products which are made by well-known brands. Personally, I would debate that this has some disadvantages which will be deliberated in the forthcoming paragraph.
Regarding drawbacks, more and more people who spend on other exclusive luxury brands could probably experience compulsive buying behaviour. A majority of rich societies highly waste their money on it as they seem to preserve prestige and status. For instance, collecting the limited edition bags looks to be more outperformed than others. Furthermore, those who live in poor or medium finance attemptively achieve social recognition to prove their existence. Some customers forcefully purchasing expensive products will disturb their budgeting plan, consequently, they barely have financial goals in the future, even worse, falling into mounting debt.
On the other hand, people with a high disposable income wisely allocate their money to own famous clothings which can build their personal branding to respect their important position at office. Hence, the business appearance will not only determine what levels of colleagues ones collaborate with, but also present global networking opportunity to earn big money. In addition, some consumers who are financially incapable of owning luxury brands may acquire self-confidence to adjust them in certain occasions. Should this group of societies get accepted publicly, they will both boost their finance and reach better life.
In conclusion, while this issue about spending money on luxury brand outweighs its drawbacks, I would contravene that the benefits of this are performing professional respect towards colleagues and increasing self-confidence lead to more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76833976834 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94216094512 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702702702703 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2627610023 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151628281312 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509015159309 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656139119963 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817087225056 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299820731637 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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