In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Nowadays, due to the development of technology, fighting crimes has become easier and more convenient than the past. By install cameras in public places, polices can now trace the criminals and avoid violent in the society, leading to the reduction of criminal rates. However, a number of people feel that they have had less freedom since those measures are applied. In my opinion, there are more benefits than drawbacks when enclosing these methods.
On the one hand, increasing the number of cameras in public has many disadvantages. people living in that area will have the feeling of being followed and they can not have their own privacy to do what they like. Also, the government could collect the information of every citizen, which seems to violate the residents' privacy. this could be very dangerous because hacker can attack the main computers and then draw out the citizens' information for blackmail purposes. Moreover, the government can sell these files to advertising company to get money, in spite of the fact that this could put the resident in a lot of inconvenient and annoying situations.
On the other hand, the police and people have derived many benefits from these appliances. By having cameras in public places, the police can locate the criminals whenever they commit crimes. With this powerful tool, the authorities and polices could solve difficult cases and stop the criminals faster and more effectively . Besides, by collecting the citizens' information, the government could assess their behavior to have more effective policies to prevent and avoid people to embark on a life of crime.
In conclusion, despite some disadvantages, cameras are still the effective and powerful tool to help fighting crimes. In the future, these measures should be widely applied for a law-abiding society with zero crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20608108108 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67522772975 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4143633108 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177540535293 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628095356658 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514595023708 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105424609333 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130115387995 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.