Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, the museums attract a huge number of people come to visit, this puts the museum in overload situation and raises an issue of operation management, quality maintenance and improvement then budget is the most important thing need to be carried on. Beside sponsorships, some museums also charge for entrance fee of visitors, while the others one don’t. This essay will share reason to analyse pros and cons of charging people for entrance fee then come to an reasonable conclusion.
The obvious reasons that museums also need budget for operation and charging people for entrance fee is one of the ways. This is reasonable when people contribute for the museums to maintain, improve properties which they admire. This will make visitors appreciate and eager to protect properties. There are so many museums in the world charge for entrance fee and bring a good service that satisfy visitors.
The opposed to this say that it may lessen the number of visitors because of those people are not willing to pay for the fee. They formed in their mind that public constructions should be free but they forget that it also need people to manage, organize to maintain or even improve the quality, service year over year for them to visit.
On balance, to satisfy the objective of budgeting for operation cost but won’t lose the visitor number, the museums should be encouraged to charge for entrance fee but the range should be reasonable and affordable for mass audience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 469, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04858299595 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57827675453 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534412955466 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0979200971 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.7 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30949035476 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149259598496 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844853416664 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208967909202 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069666607408 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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