Many people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Every human being in this world has bad circumstances such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. People’s perspective in such situation differ, some habituate to accept the situation while others strive to make it better. Trying to improve worst circumstances without blindly accepting would be my stand point for this argument
People belonging to different age group, being an adult, adolescent adults or mature parents face lot of challenges in day to day life. They meet a lot of people and encounter lot of social constrains from which they somehow find a way to come out of the situation. But the question is, are they really trying to sort out the situation?
Nowadays young adults start their career not with regards to their passion or interest, instead do it under social pressure. For instance, education nowadays is quite expensive and a student from a middle-income family who finishes college and opt for employment are already in the stress of education loan, so they are forced to take up any job, even if it is unsatisfactory. Thus, people who are in continuous short of money are forced to stay in unsatisfactory jobs. This is one view of the scenario. However, the similar set of middle-income youngsters might take up the same job, put in their hard work, improvise his/ her knowledge and make it fruitful for them. This is a positive approach to the same scenario. Hence it is in the mentality of people to approach the given situation
In conclusion, it is positive attitude and willingness to improve the situation is the essential key to approach any bad circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'improve the worst'.
Suggestion: improve the worst
...ers strive to make it better. Trying to improve worst circumstances without blindly accepting...
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Line 3, column 720, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...positive approach to the same scenario. Hence it is in the mentality of people to app...
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Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f people to approach the given situation In conclusion, it is positive attitude a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95185185185 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9321756975 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4354927407 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247447490558 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890693545848 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091483954855 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151626004557 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107476976088 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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