In many societies in the world, the population is aging rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare.
A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future.
With the well-developed medical science, people nowadays indeed have a longer life expectancy. However, on another perspective of this change, many nations have been suffering from the cost of the healthcare services. In my opinion, I do agree that a proper increase in the pay for healthcare services is rational and neccessary in the future.
We are living in a nice era with the greatest medical system, which people are obviously healthier than in the past. However, humen will still get older and need more medical treatments. Countries like Japan and Korea are meeting the problems of the rapid increase of aging population. They spend more money on taking care of these elderly and suffer from healthcare provision. These problems not only bring to these certain countries but also to the entire world in the future. We must face them eventually in order to improve a better healthcare system for all of us.
To alleviate this burden, one simple way is to increase the tax from citizons. But this might cause a problem which those people who cannot pay a higher tax for the medical treatment, in this case, governments could set levels on the healthcare services which correspond to how much they pay the tax. Or on the other hand, the elderly could have an option of paying for better healthcare services with a part of their pension. It is a true that we should all bear the difficult situation on this matter, and I think governments should take the responsibility on taking care of them since these people were the great contributors who worked hard in their productive age for their respective countries.
To conclude, it is a fact that the aging population result in the higher cost of public healthcare. Regarding the problems, I firmly believe that governments play an important role in provisioning medical resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, still, well, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9644012945 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74085004761 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550161812298 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7856882961 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319254098044 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911757154794 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658909057644 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174988592846 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447214644807 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.