Many students now have the opportunity to study in other countries. Studying abroad may bring some benefits to some students, but it also has a significant number of disadvantages.
Discuss both sides of the argument and give your own opinion.
In the contemporary era, since globalization became worldwide trendy, pupils have been offered abundant studying overseas probabilities. It is advocated that this tendency brings about a handful of utilities for scholars while others imply that it still has remarkable adversities. The quoted outlooks will be depicted in this essay.
To begin with, engaging in foreign education lays the foundation for undergraduates to broaden their cognition about diverse aspects of life. During the courses, they may enter into a partnership with other counterparts from diverse walks of life which expedites their language acquisition as well as interaction competence flourish. Overseas students will stand a great chance of getting a high-stipend occupation withal. At the particular university, seniors can apply for an internship to train working expertise before being officially recruited. Consequently, with an international degree and working experience, alumni will have dominance over other peers to work for prospective enterprises.
On the contrary, advantageous as studying abroad is, it is worth contemplating that there are some adversities. Engaging in an overseas educational basis requires a huge monetary allocation for schooling and living fees. The high cost of living in flourishing countries prompts parents to shoulder the financial burdens more massively. Moreover, being frustrated and homesick is also an obstacle that learners have to confront. When blending into a new civilization, scholars commonly come up against the cultural barrier or even cultural shock. It takes them a long-term attempt to accustom themselves to these impediments.
In brief, although learning in a different nation may leave a few adversities, it still has considerable propitious merits. From my vantage point, I strongly assert that the utilities dominate its handicaps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, in brief, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81454545455 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18424634622 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705454545455 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4265998063 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115121095429 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332193174322 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428837573386 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591665277278 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272003854109 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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