Many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars than famous people in the history of their countries. What are the causes? Give solutions to increase the number of people to know about famous people in history.
It is true that international pop and movie stars are now more well known in the young age group than famous historical figures of their countries. There are a number of reasons behind this view and several solutions should be adopted by both governments and individuals to improve the situation.
On the one hand, there are two primary causes why youngsters admire celebrities from other nations more than those who in their countries’ past. One reason is that as the development of technology, artists and famous people nowadays often have their own website and have many wise marketing strategies to promote themselves and young people, who take social networking as a way to fulfill their curiosity about trendy and popular things in the outside world, are the key targets. For example, youngsters have been reportedly the most popular age group to spend their time online, by then, they might catch an advertisement of a new song of an international singer, and it has never been that easy to share things online like these days. Furthermore, although one of the top goals of teaching history in school is to help students learn more about their culture, they are often boring and do not live up to the expectations of young students, such as vividly colorful pictures or videos instead of black and white ones.
On the other hand, there are several appropriate measures can be taken to tackle the problems described above. Firstly, Internet providers and media companies can take part in bringing ancient figures to the virtual world instead of meaningless contents and advertisements. Secondly, teachers can make their lessons more interesting by adding videos or even cartoons as there are hardly any colorful pictures in the past. This also means that artists, designers should create more films and videos for young children about historic events and famous people. Finally, parents can tell their children more about stories in the past as they are close to children the most, thereby, not only parents-children relationship can be tied up, but older people in the family can also recall their memory and keep their brain functional.
In conclusion, there are indeed various causes from the trend that international celebrities are more popular than historic figures in the young age group, yet, they can be solved once suitable solutions are widely used.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11825192802 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66914561745 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565552699229 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2264801615 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.916666667 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4166666667 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259375153113 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084557745955 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671841765091 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150144899824 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435944315953 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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