The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the media plays a crucial role in society as a source of information. Many people believe that news coverage should focus more on good news. While there is ample evidence supporting this notion, I partly agree with it as I argue that bad news should continue to be reported when necessary.
There is a good case for believing good news is rarely made as front page headlines as these positions are often dominated by sad stories. Whenever people read news, they are susceptible to negativity, which might pose a threat to their mental health. Therefore, I contend that more good news should be informed as it has a positive impact on public morale. For instance, in recent years, multiple scientific breakthroughs have been achieved in the treatment of certain types of cancer and by being kept informed about this news, people will be uplifted to become more optimistic and hence, have a reason to believe in a better future.
Nevertheless, I hold the viewpoint that it would be misguided to introduce restrictions on the reporting of tragic news events. It can be seen that the world is facing a multitude of problems ranging from natural disaters to crimes and terrorism. And I opine that it is essential for people to keep abreast of these happenings in order to have enough intrinsic knowledge of contemporary issues. In case these are being derelicted by the media, in the interest of reporting cheerful news, people may not have a tendency to implement measures to tackle them, leading to the deterioration of life quality.
In conclusion, I do agree that it is important for the media to provide people with more positive messages. However, significant bad news still needs to be fully-reported without being exaggerated so that the public will be aware of some serious problems facing the world today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...entific breakthroughs have been achieved in the treatment of certain types of can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92903225806 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77768722248 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7848149224 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236341523255 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945377943314 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689496743973 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158143142045 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611303604208 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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