In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In modern times, many people believe that it is pointless to use food and products made from animals, such as clothing and medicines. While there might be some opposing arguments, I still agree with this view due to more convincing reasons.
On the one hand, this opinion seems unreasonable simply because animal food is main dishes of most people. For example, western people tend to consume meat, cheese, milk, and eggs every day, while Asians often eat chicken, pork as well as fish. Thus, it is likely to be difficult for people who eat animal food every day to stop using animal products.
In spite of the arguments above, I highly support this view for the following reasons. Firstly, eating animal products could be unhealthy. To illustrate, farmers often raise animals with harmful chemicals to boost the development of these species. Hence, some of them consume meat which suffers from serious diseases, such as cancer.
Another reason is that vegetarian food might provide enough nutrition for us. A good example of this is that vegetables, including nuts and avocados, may contain protein and vitamins. As a result, most people who follow a vegetarian diet have good health without eating meat and using animal products
In conclusion, Although I recognize possible arguments to reject the discussed view, there are more convincing reasons to believe this idea is reasonable
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12334801762 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49425585511 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629955947137 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2894587847 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9166666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236431312666 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853517911308 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708188997812 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119264048811 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655354406933 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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