More and more people today are choosing to eat only healthy food and are making time to exercise regularly. Why is this? What can be done to encourage other people to eat only healthy food and to make time to exercise regularly?
With the increasing of fast-food chains and technology, more and more problems related to that are developing uncontrollably. However, people now are more conscious of their health and starting to eat healthier food and taking regular exercise. This essay will show the reason behind this trend and some possible ways to promote it further.
There are a number of reasons why this trend becomes more and more widely known. The first reason for the growing healthy lifestyle is the result of education. Children in school are provided with a healthier diet and may even be offered a vegan diet if they want. While more and more websites and magazines encourage people to have a balanced diet. In terms of taking exercise daily basis, health awareness campaigns raise people’s consciousness about the danger of a sedentary lifestyle and promote various ways to keep fit. Another reason is people, especially young people, are inspired by celebrities' and influencers’ lifestyles. They tend to follow their idol’s eating habits and want to have a nice body like famous people so they are looking for star’s eating and working out methods to keep in shape. For example, this can be observed widely in numerous health magazines such as Men’s Health and Women’s Health publishing the daily fitness routines and meal plans of stars.
To support this development, there are several ways that can be taken by the government. Firstly, it is important to reduce the price of healthy food to make it more affordable for everyone. Although healthy food is available in supermarkets, its price is more expensive than other food, making it difficult for low-income families to choose healthier options. Secondly, the government should spend more funding to free sports and exercise facilities. This can create more opportunities for people to engage in physical activities. Some areas are lacking facilities and equipment or do not have space for outside activities, which restricts everyone to participate in sports and exercises.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the development of living a healthier life and measures can be implemented by the government to encourage this trend further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28328611898 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80481584972 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552407932011 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3713177346 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.611111111 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341695642148 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102223372053 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725008248202 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191919310418 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760847957585 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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