More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons?
Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In today’s world, a large number of individuals have a tendency to purchase items such as clothes and cars that come from high-end brands. In the following essay, the reasons for this trend will be discussed, and, in my point of view, the merits of this phenomenon are overshadowed by the demerits.
To begin with, society has recently become more and more materialistic especially among youngsters or in other words is Gen Z. So, buying these products from highly reputed companies, say Christian Dior, Chanel is prior to reflecting weath, social status or simply appearance which means that people are having a habit of judging others by their outward show. In particular, many people are of the opinion that putting on Nike or Adidas clothes makes them more stunning and lavish than the products from smaller brands. By that way, they can get more attention from others and also acknowledge them. Furthermore, a few years ago and until now, many girls in the US particularly and in the world generally have begun to find ways to keep up with Kylie Jenner- an Instagram model who is one of the most influential figures on social media today. They are commencing to buy things which are sort of extravagant and inconsequential to their life. For that reason, some people are trapped into debt as a result of using credit cards to buy products for which they don’t actually have the money.
Having said that, it is undeniable that reputable brands offer products of high quality and reliability, providing buyers with a great sense of satisfaction. Take Apple for example, Apple’s smart phones are famous for their durability and world-class security, so, it is easy to comprehend that each sale of their products brings in millions of dollars in profit. On par with this, the more people spend, the more jobs are created. This can be a solution for countries having such a giant unemployed rate like Congo, Liberia,..
In conclusion, the growing consumption of brand name products might be explained by their luxurious appearance, uniqueness and excellent quality, and I believe that this tendency is disadvantageous to our families and society in certain important ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in particular, sort of, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03305785124 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74839746982 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614325068871 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1263577853 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225007731799 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809031759043 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633024782826 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111699263309 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690066572531 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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