More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other
items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Garments, cars, accessories manufactured by luxurious brands have become a strong desire among a large number of people. this occurs due to several reasons and it may trigger many adverse effects on society and individuals.
numerous reasons are accounting for this trend. The primary reason leading to this growing tendency is probably the fact that today, we are living in a society that judges people so much by their material worth. Therefore, intending to reflect on the high level of social status, individuals tend to purchase some products stemming from renowned labels such as Nike or Gucci. For example, there is a dramatic rise in the number of influencers and celebrities creating videos on YouTube about
showing
off pricey cars and sumptuous accessories to
show
off their property. In addition, luxurious goods may give consumers a sense of confidence and superiority to make them feel more self-assured as well as enhance their appearance.
Although there is a growing number of people having a craving for purchasing exorbitant commodities, this may bring about a severe impact on both society and humans. The leading limitation of this trend is that it may create a yawning gap between social classes, particularly is the discrepancy between wealthy people and impoverished ones. While a large number of individuals die from famine and diseases, plenty of resources and effort have been allocated to generate numerous products which are blatantly exorbitant. this may seem to be a waste of money and funds. In terms of individual consequences, many pricey cars or handbags probably become the target for muggers which leads to being a perilous situation for owners. For instance, in big cities, people wearing luxurious clothes and using expensive phones will likely run a higher risk of being stolen and attacked.
In conclusion, the trend of buying several commodities originating from famous labels is brought about by many factors and this issue might result in severe impacts on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29192546584 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78917260423 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593167701863 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2226352029 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906013590969 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299697850597 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192339825442 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478659058019 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0027186324597 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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