Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or
shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
people have differing views regard to the acceptance of tragic circumstances daily. While some people claim that it is only satisfaction that is the most viable solution to face off tough challenges, I lean towards others who believe that making effort to enhance the current state of affairs is further better than the first belief.
On the one hand, there are two strong reasons why a large number of individuals firmly back up the first viewpoint. firstly, dilemma triggers from time to time which is unavoidable. For instance, in a marriage, conflicts between spouses are inevitable, thus without the acceptance of their discrepancies and personalities, it could be likely that they run a higher risk of dissolving their marriage. Another reasonable culprit bringing about the approval of the unwanted situation is that it can diminish the pressure stemming from the attempt to promote it. If we redouble our effort to untangle issues, it can have a severe impact on our health, especially our mental health. Be pleased with what we are obtaining is also an effective method to escape from strain to have a happier life without anxiety.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that making several attempts to enhance the present circumstance is the most excellent way. firstly, having a proactive attitude towards our occupation enables us to the status of unstoppable learning as well as achieving progress continuously. thus, it allows us to develop a positive self-image and possess ample further promotion opportunities in our specialization. Secondly, concentrating on seeking measures for predicament assists us in modifying our negative emotions to positive ones. Unless we consider our feelings and let them get worse, our mental health will be seriously influenced in the long-term phase.
In conclusion, it is not a fallacy for numerous people who believe that the acceptance of challenges rather than dealing with them is the most feasible way, I strongly concur that the more we strive for, the more circumstances are enhanced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26829268293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95239721513 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612804878049 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8119497918 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.428571429 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0777069555382 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025339639814 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333494391699 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554869965415 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445199402341 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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