Most countries want to improve standard of living through economic development, however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
Every country wishes to advance their living standard, and the development of economic is way to reach that goal. Some people believe that economic progress leads to social value’s lost. I tend to admit that economic development’s benefit is more significant than a drawback and I am going to elaborate more in this essay.
One the one hand, it can probably be said that to increase living standard with economic growth is beneficial since one population requires a lot of material which could possibly provide their needs and it is compulsory for them to own money. With economy improvement, the quantity of goods is incline and it is affordable for community in order that life quality of residence is improved. This leads to the purpose of economic development itself, which means not only does community gain benefits, but a country could increase its income as well. For instance, better education system could possibly be reached by students from rural area; improvement for better health care is possible to do.
On the other hand, those who argue, social value degradation is caused by economic growth, is proven as community is too focused to collect as much income as possible and set aside traditional norms. Hence, it can be seen in the city that workers are self-center and less socialized with others. In addition, the opponents argue that it will lead to lack of morality since community are money oriented and people who need help would possibly be neglected.
To sum up, it could be possibly admitted that economic progress effects the social values decreasing. Nevertheless, economic growth is essential for developing a country and its inhabitant. Thus. this outweighs its possible disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...lation requires a lot of material which could possibly provide their needs and it is compulsor...
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Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
.... For instance, better education system could possibly be reached by students from rural area;...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...eveloping a country and its inhabitant. Thus. this outweighs its possible disadvanta...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ing a country and its inhabitant. Thus. this outweighs its possible disadvantage. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14234875445 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77943461379 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6595592236 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234462637042 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938346611836 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708584009431 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162698146723 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797278136459 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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