New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s modern world, courses for parenting has become increasingly popular. Some believe that parents in this era should participate in such courses so that they could help their offspring to fully develop themselves. As far as my opinion is concerned, I strongly agree with this statement for two main reasons, which will be presented in this essay.
To commence with, for young parents who never have children before, it would be easier for them if they attend a parenting course. This is because they would be able to learn how to take care of a child properly, which they never experienced in the past. Engaging in such courses not only make their life as parents less stressful but can also provide juveniles with a happier environment during their early ages, which contribute significantly to their cognitive development.
In addition, besides teaching people daily skills of a parent, parenting courses could also widen their knowledge about techniques to fully develop their offspring’s innate ability. Artistic talent, for example, can be discovered through young children’ hand drawing. Instead of neglecting such gift, parents could send them to art schools so that they can become talented artists in the future. As a result, those youngsters would be able to explore their ability, which help them to have a better understanding about themselves and become successful in their career.
In conclusion, as people are giving more concern about raising children, I contend that parents should sign up for parenting lessons for the aforementioned justifications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35458167331 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82121228238 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5850376609 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.181818182 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257027047473 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106849400609 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683066990241 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171161598179 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00577033421316 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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