Nowadays some parents pressure their children to be successful. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Nurturing the children is one of the most significant responsibilities of parents, and they use different ways in this process. Some parents, these days, put more pressure on their children as they want them to succeed in life, I think this may have unfavorable effects on children’s future.
The reason why some parents insist their children on achieving success is that probably they had experienced lots of tough situations in life, before reaching their own aims. These parents desire to ease the life for their children, and sometimes force them to learn subjects that are likely to bring them success. For example, an ordinary teacher who works at school intends to see their children as a successful government official.
These efforts of parents are likely to be detrimental than useful for children, due to their future impacts. Here I am referring to the fact that some parents force the children to give up their favorite activities, like playing musical instruments, and send them to boarding schools, where they learn the knowledge that they have no interest. Eventually, they will have to do the job which they do not enjoyment or satisfaction.
However, there are some people who argue that parents do this for the sake of the children’s bright future. They feel that providing parents insist them to be successful and help them to overcome barriers at a young age, they will have more chance to succeed.
To conclude, even though parents wish their children to achieve good results and have a good standard of living in the future, I do not believe it is a positive trend, as successful does not mean happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01459854015 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75607138118 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2305752696 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293268274154 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126111666904 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669561867471 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168744771684 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404814463326 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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