In a number of countries, some people thinks it’s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In a strand of nations, residents believe that the authorities should allocate budgets for building new railway lines in order to have more fast trains between cities. However, the idea is not straight forward since others support for existing public transports' improvement. This essay will debate both of the ideas and give my opinion on them.
On the one hand, there are several benefits that new railway lines bring to citizens' commute. To begin with, it is universal accepted that using railway lines does wonder for cutting down traffic jam problem since the capacity of a train is significantly bigger than bus or other public transports. In addition, if there were more subways lines between locations, those people who use this vehecle might save their time by getting exact the destination they want to come instead of overcoming then have to comeback by a taxi.
On the other spectrum, a state of the art public transportation system has its own advantages which makes a wide range of residents frequently support for improving. Firstly, in comparation with adding more railway lines, fixing bus systems is drastically cheaper. In this way, no more tax added for commutters which makes them quite satisfy about this. Furthermore, ruuning bus system is not require too many staff so the citizens do not have to pay more for their salary as well.
In conclusion, for both of two ideas, there are major advantages for people when goverment invests in railway lines or other public transportation. However, in my perspective, I am favor in the bus system than subway because of not only aforementioned reasons but also it is quite popular for all the people from students, workers and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 503, Rule ID: TO_COMEBACK[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to come back'?
Suggestion: to come back
...to come instead of overcoming then have to comeback by a taxi. On the other spectrum, a st...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...ck by a taxi. On the other spectrum, a state of the art public transportation system has its ow...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
... Furthermore, ruuning bus system is not require too many staff so the citizens do not h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98943661972 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6845376164 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9440582025 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221582060153 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846646236044 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644497320316 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145092469622 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591292667929 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.