People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption
it is definitely true that the amount of sugary drink has increased rapidly in recent years for everyone. While there are several reasons to explain that situation, some countries start to reduce the amount of sugar by many ways.
advertisement is on one of the main reason why the amount of soft drink has increased increased " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">sinificantly. promoting sugary one by them may help them to approach consumers fast, especially h. By this way, these business may not only make their brand become popular but also accumulate a big amount of incomes. Additionally, soft drinks like coca, santa, etc, may boost human's energy, help them to become more energetic to work. However, it may affect drinkers' health badly if they drink too much.
And in order to solve that situation, the government should control the marketing work, especially the advertising. In particular, instead of promoting sugar-based drinks, bringing more healthy food is the right thing has has " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">to be done. In addition, rising the taxes on sugary drinks may become a huge barrier to prevent the consumers from buying these kind of products. And last but not least, each person must aware how danger these kind of soft drinks are, and go on diet if necessary. Thus, for the sake of balancing the amount of sugar in their body, thay should should " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">reduce the amount of sugar, eat healthy food, do exercises, etc.
Inconclusion, besides some drawbacks of sugary drinks, there are some benefits if people can control their balance. The government and each person should also try to keep on balancing to avoid the bad effects that sugar-based drink provides
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, thus, while, in addition, in particular, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39661016949 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51978688864 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6574577892 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240411741581 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079162782995 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427853140777 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147682309278 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180880885171 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.