people have little understanding of the importance of the natural world
<p class="MsoNormal">In the modern life, it is true that many citizens lack of an
insight into the nature. This development can be attributed to several factors
and there are feasible steps could be taken to raise people’ awareness of the
natural world. </p>
<p class="MsoNormal">There are two main reasons accounting for this phenomenon.
From an education perspective, while many exam-driven curriculums place
excessive emphasis on so-called “core subjects” such as maths and physics, they
tend to undermine the others, including nature-related subjects. This can make students
see no reasons to gain an insight into the nature. Additionally, these
education systems often leave students little chances to go on field trips to
zoos or natural reserves. All these combined lead to the fact that for these
students, natural world still remains an unfamiliar concept. Another reason is
that nowadays, many traditional rituals related to the natural seasons have
sunk into obscurity. To illustrate, celebrations of nature at times of spring
or harvest, which once provided a link to the Mother Nature, have disappeared
among the urban dwellers for decades. </p>
<p class="MsoNormal">However, people can study the natural world in many ways. Firstly,
schools should incorporate nature-based disciplines including environmental
science and biology into both curriculum and extracurricular activities. For
instance, taking excursions to the nature reserve such as Bach Ma National Park in Vietnam is a
practical way for students to gain their first-hand experiences of the nature.
Secondly, environmental activists can take advantage of the proliferation of
social media such as the internet and TV documentaries to disseminate the
significance of nature. In this way, they can provide the public with not only a
great appreciation for the nature but also the reasons to give a hand in
combatting environmental degradation.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">In conslusion, the insufficiency in knowledge of the nature
can stem from two main sources and can be overcome by several solutions taking
place in the fields of education and social media. </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.57575757576 5.12529762239 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.30996122428 2.80592935109 225% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0582463681 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.38176352705 685% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131801083996 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627825847326 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584662861308 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0375108536269 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500690394868 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.88 12.4159519038 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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